Rough cut of Guilt Grieving

This is our first rough cut of our film and there are many things that not only need to be improved but need to be removed or added. Also, we didn’t take the sound into consideration as it will be dealt with in later stages. When I finished editing this film we conducted audience research from peers, my teacher and our target audience through feedback after viewing our film.

There were many things that we needed to change or add. The first thing was to re film the opening scene in the station as there was heavy movement and it wisent stable. Secondly, the walking out the station scene was too long and the continuity wasn’t appropriate in both taxi and bridge scene. I was also told to shorten the part where Duha walks to the London eye and slow down the part where we see a long shot of the London eye. There was also concern of the train seen as our team member Shalimar was in a shot and we didn’t seem to notice his appearance. We were told to crop him out. We also needed to add the transition of the knife and add a scene in the end where she walks away from the grave, looks back and the credits appear.

From this I conclude that there is allot of improvident to be made and I will take each constructive feedback into consideration.