All three posters inspired us through the great composition, lighting and contrasted colours used in each poster. Each of these posters has a picture of a male and female but there all portrayed differently. In the poster ‘You kill me’; the girl is represented with a high status. This is suited to our film as the female protagonist has more power than the male. Also the girl is hiding behind the male, this is a great inspiration to our poster draft as the audience are left to question what role she plays in the film.
In addition, we were also inspired of the poster ‘Death defying acts’. What inspired us mostly was the innocent look on both characters faces. The bright strong colours used is contrasted by the weak red used, hence signifying that the film poster may contain a twist.
The poster ‘Match point’ portrays the aspect, secretive and devious. This is a great way of creating a mysterious and vague effect, leaving the audience intrigued.
Our overall poster draft will be developed through combining different main aspects of each poster making an overall great poster.
• Organise blog posts so they are chronological. (You must have your analyses first of all, then your initial ideas & target audience research and go from there). You need to make sure that your blog shows a clear & linear sense of progression. Try to spend some time organizing correctly as this will allow you to gain marks more easily.
ReplyDelete• Inspirations should also be embedded with images and/or video clips and try to make sure that you have embedded videos directly, rather than providing links.
• You initial ideas posts are good, but are disjointed and need to be organized and collated together as one post. Try to show more clearly that you thought of one or two ideas and then fleshed out a final one in more detail.
• You must have 1 more analysis of a film magazine review, focusing on use of conventions, style, layout etc. As well as 1 more analysis of a short films. I would also remove one poster analysis (Bullet Boy) as it doesn’t fit in with the rest of your analyses. You also need to re-format your ‘Sign Language’ film analysis as it is messy and hard to follow.
• Must explain in detail each aspect of your poster and magazine review, noting why used. Link this to the conventions of posters & magazine reviews and use terms and justify reasons why you are creating it in this way. Link to the brand identity that you are trying to create.
• You need a completed logo, again with reasons why you have completed it in this way, linked to your overall brand identity. We will work on this tomorrow.
• You also need to add in posts on props & costumes, with images & reasons for your choices.
• Once completed, you should upload your storyboard animatic and script too. As well as adding in your updated interviews.
• You must look to complete your brand identity post and tighten up your target audience profile, so that it links in directly with your questionnaire’s & interviews.
• Have your research & planning diary as one post, with your filming schedule after this, probably as your newest post. Also, you have added the poster inspirations twice, so delete one of these.
Student Marks Level Grade
Duha 13 3 C
Abdou-Noor 13 3 C
Shalimur 10 2 D
Your blog lacks consistancy , both in color and in post lengths. Some posts are one line long and others are upto six paragraphs. The color coordination within your blog is also not effective.
ReplyDeleteYour logo does not reflect your brand identity or genre. In fact it looks like a sci fi logo and prevents the audience from familiarising with the your ACTUAL brand identity.
Your target audience profile is not sufficient . It lacks depth and detail.
Have to congratulate you for some analysis , which are well shaped and written but this needs to keep consistant throughout.
Some information on posts should be embeded in other posts rather than having a post of their own. For example one sentence is not enough.
abdounour-
ReplyDeletewe / I will work on the logo and colour scheme.
Duha
ReplyDeleteTarget- I will go through thr blog and change the date of the uploaded post in order for it to be in chronological order. Organise blog.
Shalimur - i will be working on the completion of our brand logo and also help the completion of the props. i iwll also be helping my collegue sin completing other tasks aswell as my own.
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